by Kayla Jun 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Dear Diary, |
by Whisper
Very good. However, I see that on many of your poems you use "though" a lot. Either find something else to be there (if you still want that syllable) or take it out (which wouldn't make it sound bad). Just some helpful criticism. Anyways, it was a wonderful poem and you are an amazing poet. 4/5 |
Tis a wonderful and sweet poem, glad to see your love for your boyfriend, i give this a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!! |