Wow i can relate to your poem except im a guy lol, very sad very nice transition and description 5/5
The Hearts With A Talent

Omg! thats is the best poem i ever read! 5/5 good job!

That was really good. I loved the last 2 lines.
"The light goes out
The girl gives up"
I dont know why... it just ended the poem very nicely. Though, I was confused on whether you had a rhyme scheme or not. But wonderfully penned none-the-less

~Casey Jillian

Wow this poem was just amazing i really understood and could connect to every word and it was all so deep. You truly are one of a kind ((and thanks so much for the comment)). Cant wait to read more

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Deep and intensive in meaning, the flow is great plus the lexical quality. I like th rhymes and the structure of our piece. tc