Comments : Breath

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    Aww, this was really sad. I seriously have tears in my eyes. This was a beautifully written poem. I cannot beleive that it has no comments!!! I am proud to be the first commenter, keep up the awesome work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Oh my.. this is so sad...

    i love how you make all of your poems very detailed.. its makes it easily imaginable..

    good job on this one.. 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    "Angelic darkness" Wow what a beautiful imagery, just two words which grab the attention of the reader!

    I really popped my mind, and I just thought of angelic darkness and realised how special and apt is it for this piece.

    The misery expressed touches the heart.

    I hope it is not real!