Change Your Mind.

by Teria   Jun 30, 2007


Change Your Mind.

He died instantly,
such a fatal death.
A mind too rational
for a human brain.
Solid and sturdy,
with nothing left.
Perhaps the book
he read yesterday.
But, a life not lived
a breath not breathed
a walk not walked,
and a soul not whole.
I heard that's why
you took him away..
But, if you change your mind..
He'll change his ways.

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  • 17 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Short and concise but that is in its favour. both of you poems i have read now have great endings. often poets start off great but the end is the let down. yours however are not. xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Short and sweet, this is great. You managed to express so many things with those precise words. I can say it just superb and very well penned. 5/5 all the way. Tc

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