Leslea my godess

by Tylor delcourt   Jun 30, 2007


Your hair is like a golden Field of dandelions brushing in the wind. Your eyes are like the earth its self so round and beautiful. Your face is like the sun for it shines the light a pone me. Your skin so smooth and soft it makes me want to hug you, for your souls is the goddess of my ........... heart.

dedicated to my true love

plez comment it

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Beautifully just a wondering piece u have writen here. i know me neither never thought of hair that way but i just learn sumthing new today hehehe. well very well done. keep up the amazing job here.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I like it a lot - really sweet. and i like the dandelion part - never though of hair that way. nice =)

  • 17 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    This is really good! but hug is spelled "hug"! lol great way of expressing ur feelings

  • 17 years ago

    by Tylor delcourt

    Nice