Aw that poem was so sweet! i loved it. 5/5!! |
by Melpomene
Quite a sweet and capturing poem which I belived to be heartfet and deep showing true emotions portrayed nicely. The word choice was simple yet so strong and effective. I loved the flow it was spot on and could not find a flaw throughout this piece. Well done I liked this alot. A great read and Im sure an even better write. |
I thought it was a very sweet and heartfelt poem. and it was very nice through out it and its nice to see what people always say to others to make them feel better, 5/5 |
by unknown
It's very sweet.. A powerful poem.. ^^ |
by BlueDreams
Very touching yet so lovely poems you penned here...simply yet flow well within beautiful emotions.....so heartfelt written! awesome! |
by Goran Rahim
OMG, dear this was another great great one by you, wow you did this so beautifuly... keep it up dear... |
by Escoffier
Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem. |
by N.Lee
Great poem...... good detail! i liked reading it! |
by Hebe
Such a sweet poem. |
by Tylor
Wow.. my favorite poem.. no i think the best poem i have ever read.. good job.. i really love it |
by Avan Ahmad
Wow! i loved tis poem |
by ABake
Just close your eyes |
by aLaBYu
Awwe. just keep it up. |
.. EXTREMELY SWEET NICE JOB |
by Sugadoo
That was SO sweet. I seriously cryd when I read it and so did my co worker. You have a great gift for writing. Keep up the good work. |
by Sugadoo
That was SO sweet. I seriously cryd when I read it and so did my co worker. You have a great gift for writing. Keep up the good work. I so have to add this to my fave. |
by Dance Girlie
Very good. so simple but filled with a lot of emotion. i really like it. :) |
That was such a sweet poem i loved it!! |
That was such a sweet poem i loved it!! |
by Fan Angeleo
Nice poem. |