MY FIRST LOVE

by CEE CEE   Jun 30, 2007


Thinkin about my past and the things I used to do

thinkin of how I was so in love wit you

my first love and boy did I fall hard

I fell so deep in love with you it was like the world was juss ours

but then strange things started to happen and my soul begin to cry

I started prayin to GOD asking to help you stop actin like other guys

but as hard as I tried to change you it changed my innocent heart

I started hatin myself because we weren't together .....we were apart

as years went by everyday I cried

I cried because I had you but felt so alone inside

it was like we were together and I was the only one hopin for forever

you were on another world and then I wasnt your only girl

and now that im older I truly understand

you took advantage of the fact that I let you keep my whole world and more in your hands

now that its over and im done with your games

I remember you wantin to be with me badly wit no shame

Im laughin because I loved you and gave you chance after chance

now that i have moved on you can kiss my fat ass

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  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    I agree with Marc's remark of the line: "it was like we were together and I was the only one hopin for forever"; it candidly tugged my heart and made me ponder for awhile. It actually seemed similar with a wishful thinking. On the other hand, I didn't particularly like the concluding line; not only was it quite vulgar, but also because it isn't as strong and compelling as the other lines. Moreover, since you used jargon words, I think this fits in the slang category of Poetry...my thought, anyway...all the best and take care. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    I supposed I must warn you, sweetie, that you've violated a couple of rules in the submission terms and guidelines, particularly the fourth rule: "Do NOT submit texts in CAPITAL LETTERS." Accordingly, violation of these rules can result in suspension of your account. Once you've changed the cases of words, PM me without delay, so that I can formally review this piece and the other three pieces you've recommended. Okay.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Haha! I love the ending :D thanks this poem really inspired me to move on.. I really love my ex (first love) with all my heart it's been about 6 months since we broke up..

    Anyway you really inspired me to move on - thanks..

    IT WAS LIKE WE WERE TOGETHER AND I WAS THE ONLY ONE HOPING FOR FOREVER
    ^^ That line is really powerful.. Everyone can relate to it..

  • 17 years ago

    by dirtylilangels

    This is a good poem and i relate to most of it!

  • 17 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    Love the ending:)

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