Love the ending:)

This is a good poem and i relate to most of it!

Haha! I love the ending :D thanks this poem really inspired me to move on.. I really love my ex (first love) with all my heart it's been about 6 months since we broke up..

Anyway you really inspired me to move on - thanks..

IT WAS LIKE WE WERE TOGETHER AND I WAS THE ONLY ONE HOPING FOR FOREVER
^^ That line is really powerful.. Everyone can relate to it..

I supposed I must warn you, sweetie, that you've violated a couple of rules in the submission terms and guidelines, particularly the fourth rule: "Do NOT submit texts in CAPITAL LETTERS." Accordingly, violation of these rules can result in suspension of your account. Once you've changed the cases of words, PM me without delay, so that I can formally review this piece and the other three pieces you've recommended. Okay.

I agree with Marc's remark of the line: "it was like we were together and I was the only one hopin for forever"; it candidly tugged my heart and made me ponder for awhile. It actually seemed similar with a wishful thinking. On the other hand, I didn't particularly like the concluding line; not only was it quite vulgar, but also because it isn't as strong and compelling as the other lines. Moreover, since you used jargon words, I think this fits in the slang category of Poetry...my thought, anyway...all the best and take care. :)