Laura

by Mr M   Jun 30, 2007


You have wept inside, so long, for a love
and joy that brings those tears man conjures
with their kiss. You have kept your fingertips,
your sweet whispers with all they feel and hope,

for the only one who can ever touch
or hear your voice. You hold this holy ground
of purest resistance, believing this
is the spot that truly is your birthright.

Let this be our refuge then; in our tears,
our touch and our holy whispers spoken
for this is the place we should be in love,

so deep within our devoted coexistence.
And let this be our heaven; you and I,
hearts filled with such perfect joy, forever.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, greatly written. Every stanza is amazing, I really enjoyed in whole piece. Choice of words and flow in this piece are flawless. Well done, 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    She's abeautiful young woman though she will disagree with you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Awwww thank you soo much it was an amazing piece and i am totally flattered....so sweet

    laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was such a beautiful touching piece no words I say could describe this. I found the word choice to be some what simple yet so strong and effective which was great. Well done on writing this sweet poem with such strong emotions.~mel

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