This was such a beautiful touching piece no words I say could describe this. I found the word choice to be some what simple yet so strong and effective which was great. Well done on writing this sweet poem with such strong emotions.~mel

Awwww thank you soo much it was an amazing piece and i am totally flattered....so sweet

laura

She's abeautiful young woman though she will disagree with you.

Wow, greatly written. Every stanza is amazing, I really enjoyed in whole piece. Choice of words and flow in this piece are flawless. Well done, 5/5 from me