This poem was short simple and so effective. I loved the word choice which you portrayed throughout this piece it was simple yet held great meaning behind it. A meaningful piece of poetry you have written here. Well done~mel

Very inspirational. I like it. Great job. 5/5
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Gasttlee
Great write. Excellent message.
Take Care Cindy

This poem really captures a truth and carries a meaning we should all feel and remember.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Beautifully said or written, great work.

Great poem! Nice point made, and it's all so true. Keep up the good work.

What a poem, man! You bring out plenty of truth and depth in such a short piece! 5/5

Its so true about us

That was fantastic =D A very great moral that I think we all need to remember and be aware of ^_^This one well deserves more then a 5 but I guess it'll have to do lols
Rhea

Great poem! And so very true. 5/5 form me.

Very interesting. I like the topic and you created strong and powerful atmosphere. This piece is written greatly. 5/5

YES!
This is what I'm talking about. (:
There wasn't much rhyming, therefore.. it's not forced.
It could have just been that one poem though.

Amazing meaning and poem, darling.
Keep it up.

Very karma like... good poem and i agree with you

I don't know if this is one of my favorite poems. I got a little confused. Maybe the flow just messed me up, I'm not too sure. Good job though.