by Nathan Turner Jul 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I feel alone |
Wow it sounds from all that i have read that you really liked her and that you were realy hurt but i must say you got some great poems out of it. |
by Midnight Sun
This is a good poem that is overflowing with emotion. Totally exellent! And I like the idea of giving an intro almost to what the verses ahead are gonna explain. Very nicely done. But can I ask why you want me to comment on your stuff? It's not like you think I'm all that good cause you've never commented on mine? Just curious. |
by Mezmeryz
I loved you, you were my everything |
by Steph
Another job well done...you really do well at getting your emotions across. |