Feelings

by Nathan Turner   Jul 1, 2007


I feel alone
I feel ashamed
I feel guilty
I feel hurt

I feel alone because I have no one to turn to
I wonder if happiness makes the sky turn blue
I had this feeling I have right now
I gotta release this feeling somehow

I feel ashamed at what I've done to myself
Sometimes I feel like I've been kicked under the bottom shelf
I did this to myself because of the hurt I caused you
I hate to say it but all the pain I've caused is so, so true

I feel guilty because of the unnecessary pain I've caused
When we were on that hill I wish we could have paused
But it wasn't meant to be and I'm left sitting here wondering why
I'm sat here wondering why did I not try

I feel hurt both emotionally and physically, so hurt
I don't know why as I didn't treat you like dirt
I loved you, you were my everything
Now I'd give my life to touch you, I'd give anything

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  • 17 years ago

    by jessicahernandez

    Wow it sounds from all that i have read that you really liked her and that you were realy hurt but i must say you got some great poems out of it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This is a good poem that is overflowing with emotion. Totally exellent! And I like the idea of giving an intro almost to what the verses ahead are gonna explain. Very nicely done. But can I ask why you want me to comment on your stuff? It's not like you think I'm all that good cause you've never commented on mine? Just curious.
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    I loved you, you were my everything
    Now I'd give my life to touch you, I'd give anything
    ^^ wow!!!!!!!!!! those lines are so deep! omg there so sweet and are full of so much emotion! wow they tuched my heart!
    :'( its so sad.. keep strong :)
    nuf luv xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Steph

    Another job well done...you really do well at getting your emotions across.

    Way to get out of trying to rhyme "physically" =]