Another job well done...you really do well at getting your emotions across.

Way to get out of trying to rhyme "physically" =]

I loved you, you were my everything
Now I'd give my life to touch you, I'd give anything
^^ wow!!!!!!!!!! those lines are so deep! omg there so sweet and are full of so much emotion! wow they tuched my heart!
:'( its so sad.. keep strong :)
nuf luv xx

This is a good poem that is overflowing with emotion. Totally exellent! And I like the idea of giving an intro almost to what the verses ahead are gonna explain. Very nicely done. But can I ask why you want me to comment on your stuff? It's not like you think I'm all that good cause you've never commented on mine? Just curious.
~Midnight Sun

Wow it sounds from all that i have read that you really liked her and that you were realy hurt but i must say you got some great poems out of it.