This is a good poem even though your profile says you dont usually write about things first hand this seems as though it happened to you it has so much feeling and power in it good job im glad i read it

keenan

This poem was truly beautiful and emotive, utterly tugging my heart and soul. I cannot favor a particular line/passage for every line is bloody brilliant. How you've written this piece in such an articulate manner emanated your emotions within.
Lovely work, as always. A joy to read.

Take care,
Debbie

Great poem