Threw should the through

i should be capitalized.

Oh and let me know if you don't want to correct your stuff. Once one of my friends got pissed off at me because he felt that I didnt' care about the poem. I do care about the poem I just feel the need to correct them. He's still one of my closest friends though. :)

I loved the message in the fourth stanza. It was very inspirational. :)

two stepS forward

5th stanza I think it's that*'*s

In all of lifer's huge down falls
I think you mean life's or lifes. I don't know on this one.

As for the title wise...Hmmm I think you could do better. Maybe Two steps foward and one step back.

I really loved this poem though. It had a great message the flow was wonderful as well. 5.

I think thats what you say
should be that*'*s what you say.

I really enjoyed this poem. i added it to my favorites. i liked how it flowed. the title is very clever in my opinion. great poem 5/5:):):):):):)

Morgan :):):):):):)