Why

by paul alexander   Jul 1, 2007


You have me in a circle of depression
you have me under submission
the emptiness grows inside me
it grows with every second
i scream to the world
to let me have my girl

why cant i get past it?
why do i keep it in my mind?
why don't you hurt like i do?
why cant i shake you lose?

i try so hard to move on
but every time i i try
i cry into a sad sleep
my eyes are so heavy
heavy with depression

why cant i just move on?
why cant i get you out of my head?
why must i feel this loss?
why must i live instead?

you have my heart still
i must move to some other place
to see some other face
its to late to save me
I'm already dead to you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    I loved this poem.... the words in each stanza flowed so nicely with each other, and there was definitly power in it.... i would defintily give it a 5/5 for sure, and thank you so much for the comment, it is appreciated :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Robin

    Wow that is such an amazing poem. I can relate completely, and you really put some power into this one. 5/5 for sure.
    <3Robin

  • 17 years ago

    by Jas

    I really like this poem keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Your poems is almost flawless. I mean Its very beautiful but still there is room for improvement. I loved your word choice and liked the flow. The word "you" in the last stanzas might be a mistake or else you might have deliberately written it for emphasis. Then its ok. U need to vote, to get a vote. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Congratulations on a wonderful poem! I can relate to it so much! 5/5!
    Keep up the good work!
    .x

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