Its a great poem and you did well in showing the danger hidden there, i really enjoyed reading it 5/5

I always enjoy coming to the nature section of this site. The poems here seem to be above the rest in most cases. I read your poem and found it quite interesting. Nice words and good flow kept my attention. I look forward to reading more of your works to see what appears when they are turned over.

"A whisper from the earth", I felt this part of your poem. Keep up the good work.