The Randomness of Shooting Stars

by Twisted Heart   Jul 1, 2007


From which direction do they come
And when they fall, where do they land
Do stars that shoot across the sky
Get swept inside God's gentle hands

The breeze that chants sweet melodies
Against the moon that glows so bright
Do stars get lost inside the tune
That enchants them through the night

Flicker stars dance in a group
Does one just dance another way
Then shoots across the darkened sky
Much to happy there to stay.

On these I look then make a wish
I lift my face for moon's caress
The tender wind blows through my hair
Then settles gently in my breath.

The randomness of shooting stars
Is still a mystery, I see
But like those stars that shine above
The night's enchanted me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    :) you can deffinatly write all types of poems and still come out sounds good. there is one line in here i found didn't fit like the rest though

    "On these I look then make a wish"

    other wise it was great

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy

    What an amazing poem! I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    This is a wonderful write, it makes one think of the wonder of it all. Thank you for your excellent write. May your heart always be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.

    sadaddy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    From which direction do they come
    And when they fall, where do they land
    Do stars that shoot across the sky
    Get swept inside God's gentle hands
    ^^^
    Jeannie I love this stanza!

    You are indeed the queen of uniqueness .... you never stop amazing me with the topics that flow so freely from your pen, dear friend.

    Wonderful .... wonderful read Auntie!
    Luanne

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Beautiful poem! I love it because I am a huge fan of the stars! :) They are my favorite creation! The title was very catchy! I really enjoyed this piece!
    Charisma*

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