Losing Control

by sarah debrincat   Jul 1, 2007


Shaking from anger,
losing control.
you cant stop me now,
your all fuked!

lets play a game,
you hide..and ill seek,

just wait,
no one will be able to stop me,
you cant stop this hate,
its gone too far and im going crazy

RUN FUKER...
cause im coming after you!

im coming closer...
can you feel me?

can you hear my knife
dragging against the gravel?

you'll be next,
im warning you,
dont get in my way...
once i have you,

there will be no escape.

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  • 17 years ago

    by adrian

    Wow good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    This is good... It's kind of a thriller... Great emotions you put in there... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    I really don't know how to express my admiration to your piece of gold. Keep up & best wishes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow alot of emotion
    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    I like your poem..