Comments : A Fairytale Plot Hole

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written and very sad and touching piece.
    I love the way you write, so honest and emotional.
    Another one great from you, keep up!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, this poem is superb. Your wording is incredible and the way that you described emotions is perfect. Really powerfully written peace, 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Touching poem.
    Full of emotions.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    With 78000 hours, 2742,188 minutes,
    1645331,538 seconds of friendship,
    You've made me insane...

    Breathtaking.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    I really like this poem 5/5