TearDrops From My Heart Make My Puddle of Pain

by TaNyabAbEE   Jul 1, 2007


Teardrops falling from my heart,
it's okay, I know my part.
Laugh and smile, play along,
pretend and fake, there's nothing wrong.

Feel the pain inside my soul,
hurt, confusion, can't make me whole.
So confused on who I am,
not sure if I understand.

Voices echo through my head,
my eyes are shut, my lips are lead.
Soon my heart will start to shake,
killing feelings I can't take.

Teardrops fall, just like rain,
and slowly make a puddle of pain.
Silent screams come from my heart,
but, it's okay, I know my part. . .

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSplitInTwoxx

    WOW 5/5 this is a brilliant piece of work so full of emotion my favourite lines are when it says
    "Teardrops falling from my heart,
    it's okay, I know my part."
    I can really relate to it.
    Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading some of your other stuff.
    XxKerryxX

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is my favorite stanza, as follows:

    "Teardrops fall, just like rain,
    and slowly make a puddle of pain.
    Silent screams come from my heart,
    but, it's okay, I know my part. . ."

    Verily, it was such a poignant piece of work. How moving are your words! Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Oh my... such a beautiful poem DFH! I loved reading it, I enjoyed reading every single word of this poem. Not only is the poem itself beautiful, but the title instantly catches your interest and you just have to read it! I also like how your poem is very organized sweetie, the lines are neat and together.. not scattered all throughout the poem. Keep up the good work!! I hope to read more from you soon. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

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