Oh my... such a beautiful poem DFH! I loved reading it, I enjoyed reading every single word of this poem. Not only is the poem itself beautiful, but the title instantly catches your interest and you just have to read it! I also like how your poem is very organized sweetie, the lines are neat and together.. not scattered all throughout the poem. Keep up the good work!! I hope to read more from you soon. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

This is my favorite stanza, as follows:

"Teardrops fall, just like rain,
and slowly make a puddle of pain.
Silent screams come from my heart,
but, it's okay, I know my part. . ."

Verily, it was such a poignant piece of work. How moving are your words! Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care.

WOW 5/5 this is a brilliant piece of work so full of emotion my favourite lines are when it says
"Teardrops falling from my heart,
it's okay, I know my part."
I can really relate to it.
Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading some of your other stuff.
XxKerryxX