Oooh I like it. Oh and I wrote a couple more so you can comment those cause I know you love to.XD
But really this one is pretty good.

First off I want to say that the title really caught my eye. Not many people use the word such a kismet I don't think they know what it means but really interesting. The only minor thing that needs to be changed are these â?? things a commen error that happens on the comp so nothing major. I did not to find this to be horrible what so ever it really caught my attention. Because of the title I pictured this in an idian scene I don't know if that was what you were going for but the imagery seemed so vivid to me. Well done with the an enjoyable read. ~mel

Oh, another good one dear, and the title catch my attention as Kismat is a persian word which means Luck, so it it what it means? please privete message me,lol

another 5/5 from me

It was very intersting, i dont like poems about life and nature, but i did like it, so nice job, and it had a good flow and i liked te way it was set up, 5/5

Great poem! nice and simple with a little complexity to shake it up. in a nice format, good pacing. great job

your servant:
david

Silent strength holds on
[[I like that line a lot. It describes so well.]]

Now. With all due respect, this is pretty bad. However, the beginning is wonderful. It's the part about the spirit that makes it four year oldish. =/.
If you were to enhance that in someway, or just completely take it out, it would be a five poem.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 3.5