Amazing poem, absolutely beautiful, most excellent

Bryan, Again amazement when you write poems. This is why you are on my favorites, Your write such beauty. Keep up the good work. an enjoyable read.~mel

Awesome sonnet it looks awesome and is well written has a fantastic flow really good job and thx for the comment

keenan

Great job Bryan
Love the sonnet. Imagery is wonderful. You are very talented at so many forms of poetry.

So I play this sweet Symphony Of Lies,
sitting here writing my final goodbye.

These lines really touched me.
Take care
Your friend Cindy

Beautiful poem. Perhaps writing sonnets is a better way of expressing oneself. =) I'm utterly enchanted! ~Marian

Wow! I don't usually read love poems but I just have to make an exception for this... This poem is beautifully penned... So bittersweet and touching.... And I love every single bit of this poem... Amazing! 5/5!