Wow i really liked your poem
great job
carly

Wow!
this is the best poem you've ever written
im completely in love with it :)
my favourite stanza,
"Im not perfect
im fully aware.
I have my flaws
that, Ill share."
5/5.
keep up the great work mrs. hobo :p

Loved the innocence and truth you have put in your poem and to me it seems your own story . 5 for it and keep writing and rocking

I thougth this was a good poem. Although i did not really like the part about the bible.. but thats ok. KEep up the good work.. 5/5

This pieve was absolutely an outstanding one. Your creativity is captivating...never a dull in writing and never dull in reading...