Beautifully written poem, with superb imagery. Choice of words is excellent, and the atmosphere through the whole sonnet is great. 5/5

Oh my, this one is going to my favorite poems. You are great poet, and you totally amazed me with this one. This is one of the best love poems I've read on the site. I like everything about it, from the beginning to the end.
Every word is perfectly picked and whole atmosphere of the piece is wonderful.
Great job, 5/5, but you deserve much more

Awww that was gorgeous!!!
I loved it so much
good work =D