Ohhh, me likey much. just a few issues.

These men have chosen heaven,
To fight this battle with.
For the light from the sk[ie]s,
Seems to bright to go out.<<<that just lost me

The demons approach,
Slowly taking their steps,
Newly woken,[idk, it just sounded funky]
From the long sleep they had.

that sleep stanza doesnt really need to be there.

and thnks for the comment, even though i know the poem isn't any good. haha

<333 i was surprised that you got on. yay!