WOW that was awesome , not to many people think of them at all and you wrote a very nice piece on the brave boys that fight for our freedom .
Great poem well written very sad, great job, your friend Tracy d

Your poem has a very nice story and message connected to it. Very nice 5/5

OMG! that made me cry! so very well written. good job 5/5

This is a sad story, it is really interesting though and drove me to read more and more. Its really sad how things went wrong but i believe wherever he is he is happy for you were willing to take him in.

That was Beautiful. Great Job!