Excellent poem. I am more interested in content than structure. This poem has enduring quality and covers what many must go through. This honest poem would speak to many if they would take the time to read it.

While your content and feels is pretty strong, you still have to mentain the idea that this is a poem. your writting comes out too much as a conversation than it is a poem. but again excellent content and definate true feeling

Wow

So much feeling and emotions within this piece. Great job, 5/5. Em x