This is a very good poem ciao, glad to see you back babe, love the flow and the ending was great, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! better be making more!!!!

Wounderfull poem,really enjoyed it .it was deep and meaningfull x

There are no words to describe how I feel.
Never in my life have I felt anything this real.
As I sit here and try to make words come to mind,
I'm realizing that there are not any to find.

well.. that was kinda jaw dropping.. i just couldnt stop reading, something drew me in and i felt as if i was in ur position. great work
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If I could shout it so the whole world could hear,
Or whisper it softly to anyone near,
Then they would know what I'm feeling inside -
And maybe they could begin to help me describe.

My heart has endured almost its limit on pain -
But you make it disappear like the sun with the rain.
Three little words can't sum up my heart,
But I guess that's the best place to start.
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I loved those two stanzas. It's like you wrote everything I felt/feel for someone. I loved this. Hearfelt, and I can tell it comes straight from your heart. Never stop writing!! 5/5

` Liz =]

Awww.. Ciao. That is so cute. It's so well written and it flows wonderfully. Awesome job. You are a great poet. Ciao, you are too much. That is adorable!! lol Awesome job my Hunni Bunches of Oats ^_^

Much Love,
Your Wifey
Cinnamon Toast Crunch

I have to say that was one of the most amazing poems i have ever read. and i'm nto just saying that, it was sweet and great, truly made me think of how much this person has done for you.

Kris.

This work was truly beautiful and sweet, it utterly tugged my heart and soul. In all truth, how you've written this in such a poignant manner emanated your sweltering emotions within. What a darling Andrew must be! :) Nicely done, nonetheless. ~Marian