Ok, i dont really understand this stanza....

"My place is so dark,
So calm and so peaceful,
Full of nothing but fear,
Can you believe,
It once held love?"

I dont get it beacuse at first you say "peacefual and calm" and then say that its full of nothing BUT fear.SO dont you think the person in the alley would be reckless or have anxiety instead of being calm and peaceful. Non the less it was very good, so i give it a 5/5

Almost great, but not quite, Travis. There were rocky areas.

If I wasn't there,
In the alley that day,
Then I wouldn't have seen,
Her pushed up,
On his chest. [[against his chest--unless they were on the ground?? then thats called explicit.]]