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by Travis Jul 2, 2007 category : Love, romance / lasting love
The wings of my angel, They spread far and wide, They spread to hold me beneath. Those wings are held, By the beautiful angel, Who I love to call mine. She pulls me in close to her chest, To listen to her heart beat, And to hear her soft breath. I love to sit by her side, And rest beneath, The wings of an angel. Whose arms hold me tight, While I sit here, Crying afraid I might lose her. She reassures me with few words, "I love you so much, And I'll always be yours." Those words bring pure bliss, To the broken heart, While I sit beneath, The wings of an angel.
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Pretty overall first stanza- try not to repeat words when not necessary. too typical of a guy writing a love poem. I like it better when you write something different. =] still be good though.