"As graceful as an angel;
As quick as a knife.
I watched your unfailing strength:
Your struggle for life."- my favorite stanza, beautifully written.
The whole poem is touching and simple, but powerful.
5/5

Well written poem..simple and effective...keep up the good work..."read my arabian sands and crown of thorns and comment....thank you

WONDERFUL!!! I loved it! grest job!

5/5 :]

Loved this one

Aahhh.... sweet... really lovely. had to read it twice! so well written and another wonderful concept! great peice! really!

Nice poem i enjoyed it

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