by End Of Eternity Jul 2, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
I am thunder |
by shobhana kumar
Hey Nitin |
by Ariana
This is really good, I liked how you can get so much emotion into the whole piece even though it is so short and compact. As a suggestion, I'd say have the theme of 'love' work it's way into the piece earlier than the last line, because then the last part would be even more effective and have more of an impact. Still, this is a good write, well done :) |
NicE poeM. |
by Mo
I really liked this - flowed so well, very short and to the point (without being obvious and predictable). I liked it. |
by Barry
Beautiful words of a higher nature.... |