Man this is a awesome poem! I loved every line of it! You've some talnet... and it's all pleasure to read something like this!

I am life
With no breath
I am angel
Of my own death
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that was the BEST part..I hope u're okay...havent written n a while...this is so not you!!!
keep that up..& ur poems always make me feel good =)

Great poem.
Like the structure and your word choice.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

And I am in awe
Of what i just saw!!

amazing! I don't even know what else to say

Beautiful words of a higher nature....

for in which I am all and yet ...... nothing

I really liked this - flowed so well, very short and to the point (without being obvious and predictable). I liked it.

Well written.

Mo

NicE poeM.
VerY truE.
EnjoyeD readinG iT.
TakE carE...

LUZAn

This is really good, I liked how you can get so much emotion into the whole piece even though it is so short and compact. As a suggestion, I'd say have the theme of 'love' work it's way into the piece earlier than the last line, because then the last part would be even more effective and have more of an impact. Still, this is a good write, well done :)
-ariana

Hey Nitin

this is a stunning piece of work. I think my favourite of yours!

yep, it's great to be back on the site again!

tc
shobhana