For Your Pain

by Goran Rahim   Jul 2, 2007


A dark night,
The clouds were taking over the moon
Here,
lifeless,
I was
Hoping for another morning to come soon.

Today was very upsetting
As a dear person was not feeling good.
And here I was alone
Thinking of her,
I was not in a good mood.

God, when will tomorrow come
So I can ask her how she is now.
I would love to go and take away her pain
But someone tell me how?

The person
With the promise that I'm sure
You will keep
Tonight
While you were on bed with pain
Here, missing you
I was hurt so deep.

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  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    It was so sweet. if only every guy would like to take a girls pain away. the way you worded it was perfect. i loved the way the structure was. nicely penned. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by sarenightmarexx

    Great poem 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Good poem glad i took you deal
    5/5
    how could it get anything less.

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Oh, I liked how you organized this poem in such a fine structure. I only have complaints about the need for tightening up of certain lines, in order to augment the poem's flow. But, other than that, I find this work of yours rather terrific and endearing. What a loving friend you are, indeed!

    Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care!

    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Aww :'( sad sad poem bas dast xosh i really likeds it n i hope tat person keeps the promise :P talk to yea soon.

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