Okay, just make me cry why don't you! another beautiful poem by the greatest poet, but what else would one expect of you? nothing less i'm sure. outstanding, i loved it. that's all i can say.

I was excited to know you submitted two more poems.

Here's what I think about this one:
Tonight,
I am handing over my soul
To a poem
Sending it to your cold room
So you can hug it
Knowing it is from me.
<< I like the hug part. Some poems just make me want to hug them. Yea, I'm weird like that.

You know what, I'd copy and paste every line into this comment and say something about it, but really, it's just all pretty.

5/5.

Tis was my favorite line
"You tell me,
When will that day come
When
The roses of the garden will smile
When
A promise will be completed
The day
When
Our lips meet.......... "
i keep repeting it hahah anywho dast xosh Goran

"When
The roses of the garden will smile
When
A promise will be completed
The day
When
Our lips meet.........."

This poem of yours, especially the aforementioned lines, induced a sense of warmth and fuzziness inside of me. How you brought such enchantment into play, along with the simple, yet elegant word choice, was too astonishing for words. For some unknown reason, I liked the line where you stated that, "The roses of the garden will smile", for it gave me an impression of vibrancy and hope. Thanks for giving me a smile today! =]

Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care!

Marian

So sweet very passionate and sweet
great poem keep it up 5/5

Look,
How a promise is keeping me alive,
Yet
Making me sleepless.
`I love those lines .

You are truly amazing . Another beautifully written poem by a brilliantly amazing writer (: How the poem looks and is, is so different from a lot . And the ones I've read that look like this aren't so good . But this was just wow ... It holds within it a sadness, but a hopeful light .

I don't know what's left to say .
..__MiNDYY

It's truly amazing how love can fill you with so much emotion and happiness, it's almost impossible not to become a poet. Amazing poem and great flow, the imagery was also perfect. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

Wow, i thought it was beautiful and you worded it so...magnificently, i just can really find the words.But it was a really really good poem, and its not just somthing written on paper, it has taken on life, 5/5

Wow that had emotion, superior transition and depth you may not be the most active member in club but knowing our manager is such a great poet is worth it 5/5

This poem is so full of emotion.i really liked it.

Kelsie

Beautiful! Very touching and heart-warming. Poems filled with hope and love {like this one} are hard to find. Very well executed and written. You have a beautiful talent and it shined through in this poem! 5/5!

This is a very romantic free verse poem with an outstanding flow and my favorite of all the love poems you have written

You never fail to impress me with ur talent, for everyone this might be words while for us this is a great poem as always,

What else could i say t this one , dude you did a great job, your too far from me now lol hehehe that was romantic, sweet or something, the love Poet mr Goran ... congratulation sir you did a great job again...

Gene Ross

An oustanding piece, it was a joy to read, it was very touching. Keep up the excellent work.

Wow, just wow... This piece is so deep, beautiful and full of excellently expressed emotions.
Every line is preciously amazing.
Second stanza is my favorite.
I like the flow of the whole piece, too.
Well done, 5/5 from me

You know I realy Liked this. It was......Nice LOL. I realy liked that

Nicely put!!! 5/5 yet another beautiful job....you are one of my fav authors!!!

Awwwww this is so sweet...it almost made me cry..all of your poems that i've read are so sweet and just have me daydreaming of what it would be like to have a guy like that...wonderful poem..5/5

~Michelle~

Wow, this poem is very touching.. it made me cry.. very nice. i rate this a 5