This is really beautiful poem...shows gr8 friendship....Good work!!!

God bless u

The poem its self wasnt really all that speacial. i mean the flow was off a little.But at the end,your little "not" to Nazeer that had real raw emotion and was the most captivating eye opening part of it, sorry to be negative, but its true, 5/5

A short poem.
The words are telling about a deep friendship.
I didn't really catch the flow, but the discription of the emotions makes up for it.
In short: a nice piece of writing
Take care

A very deep and meaningful write I do hope your friendship lasts a lifetime because friends are forever 5/5 Steve

Good read no wonder nazeer told me to read it
_forever carly_

The smiles I share on you never ever dies..

i have read all of your poem. it was amazing. your choices of words are great. i liked also you way of writing style

We shall remain as friends forever and forever..

"forever and forever" if it would be always and forever then that ws better.

but again its your own choice your own feelings.
and i respect your feelings.
keep it up great work
i am giving you 5/5
take care

This I must say is quite a beautiful poem. The dedication to someone was outstanding and your word choice strong and powerful showing emotions of kindness love and friendship. You really didn't need any advice so to say from me you pulled of this poem greatly. It was a sweet and caring poem for someone who obviously means so much to you. Well done a good piece of poetry you have written here.~mel

Interesting poem, nice to see some compassion between you both.

Greta

A wonderful poem..though it was a little bit flawless...but in the end it holds a true meaning of friendship..keep it up =]

Friends are those who need 2 be cherished and kept... luv ur poem... =)

ThiS remindS mE oF onE mY besT friendS- -gooD joB!

I loved this poem, because it shows the true meaning of friendship and you only needed a few strong words can show what a person thinks of another. i wish i had that great of a friend.

hope it last forever.
chatty

A shorT buT beautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!

This pieve was absolutely an outstanding one. Your creativity is captivating...never a dull in writing and never dull in reading...

ThaT iS sucH aN excellenT poeM, i lovE youR worK!!

- luzaN

YouR stylE oF writinG iS aN enjoyablE topiC. aN excellenT piecE oF worK thaT attracteD mY sinceritY verY mucH...

thiS iS luzaN froM NZ

Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love your poems..

Nazeer

Writing pleasure from you and the reading joy is from my end... be my creme guest cos I like your style of writing...

Nazeer

This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

Nazeer