I love your poem I use the same method , quick write and often they are the best usually packed full of emotions and thoughts 5/5 keep up the good work

That was really good. I like the emotion running in the poem, well done. I enjoyed reading this one! keep it up! flow was good. Thanks for the comment :)

5/5

WOW that was an awesome poem, wonderfully written and vocabulary was great, the flow was nice and you some how expressed thoughts very well, great good. just remember everything in live isn't what it seems, my old saying , believe half of what you see and done of what you hear , that way you live a long life less worries, great job on the poem, your friend Tracy d 5/5

I realy like this, and enjoyed it.....:) Keep It up...:)

Nice job on expressing your feelings in this piece. Keep writing :)
Take Care Cindy

Aww, that'S a sweetT poeM! I likE iT :)

luzaN

HellO hebA,

ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN

LovelY........

luzaN

I love this poem..beautifully well written..
It hurts to see such powerful words..very emotional..well done sweetheart..
-sarah