by Wings Of Flames Jul 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The sky crosses blood, |
All that can be said is wow... |
What the hell are u talking about it does not have nothing to do with your father |
by Jose
I love it because i can visualize what you wrote and how you feel very touching and it's great how you relate things to life and nature i love it |
Good until the end. I didn't like the last stanza. It didn't flow so nice and I just don't like political read lol. But a five out of five for the rest. :) |
by Lindsay
Your choice of words was amazing. It was put together very nicely and I enjoyed this piece as well. A chilling and powerful poem to say the least. |