by Hebe
Such a sweet poem. |
by Bryan
Dont know, good poem, pretty long though, took me awhile to read, but its a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!! |
Beautiful poem |
Very well written so much emotion was felt in this poem and ut was very honset and true this is an osm write |
by Marc Ortiz
There you go Britt :) Sorry about that I forgot where I got the 1st line :) I added your name in the bottom of the poem xD |
by Debbie
I in no way to offend, but I particularly am not keen with your frequent use of I's and variations of tenses in this poem of yours. Certain dialogues were left with no quotation marks as well, and the plot progression wasn't thought-out well. I even sensed the need for more coherent details. Perhaps that's just me, though... Other than those nitpicky details, I'd still give you my props for attempting and exerting a fine effort with this material. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care. ~Marian |
by Melpomene
This was a fine work although I do agree with miss debbers above about the constant use of "I" throughout this piece. I did enjoy the feelings portrayed behind this poem andthe meaning was great. Well done none the less on writing a greatly written piece.~mel |
by Gasttlee
Sweet! 5/5 |
You use I a lot in the poem . It's getting annoying, and I like you as a poet ! And the ending kind of made my smile drop . There were beautifully illuminating parts in this poem, portraying a gorgeous emotion within it . |
I thought it was a very sweet poem and it was nicely written, and the content and vocabularaly made it an even better read. I just loved it, 5/5 |
by Ambar
Excellent poem!! great use of vacabularly----neatly written =) definately 5/5 |
by Breeeezie
Awww beautiful poem!!! |
Love the voc, soo sweet! |
by K3LSI3
This is such a sweet poem.Nicely written.I absolutely loved it. |
by Mo
This was a lovely poem - very sad in the end but a beautiful poem of intense love. Good work! |
by Boy
Hey, the last stanza of your heart realy touched my heart. it was such a good style of writing. i loved the wya you have expressed. you realy know what is the meaning of true love. |
Ooh nice poem |
by CEE CEE
Wow i love this poem its reall sweet i hope someone feels that way about me i love when u say "More than a thousand laughs |
by Fsams
Wow very beautiful and catching. The lines are great and very descriptive. It had all poetic qualities in it. Great 5/5 for sure. tc |
by Jenni Marie
This is beautiful... |