I thought this poem was very very good.Your rhyming was dead on and it flowed really good.And I loved the ending, perfect, 5/5

I thought this poem was very very good.Your rhyming was dead on and it flowed really good.And I loved the ending, perfect, 5/5

Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem.

Wow, such a great poem. It's very well penned, the flow and rhyming excellent. I love the concept and storyline of it, pretty original. The ending linked in with the beginning and title very well, which I like. Another great poem by you. Well done. =] 5/5

Tammie

Good job sore! I like it. It almost had a humor to it. Or at least I thought so. :) But then again I write so many death poems that I think they're amuseing to read. ----->5 for you! Yay you I added you to my favorites. :p