Aw, very beautiful! i have lost tons of ppl in my life it makes me think of them i just loved it!

Your word choice was ok in this, the rhythm was a bit jumpy, but the flow was flawless...
i dont think this was totally your best, but its still really good... good job

~Sandra

A touching story. I didn't experienced any kind of loss before, but I am sure many can relate to this poem. Structure and rhyming very nice. 5/5

This is so heartwrenching..I have tears in my eyes.

The emotion in this is just beautifully created..so powerful and intense.

"a song, a true song
i wrote for you ago
your song, your one song
you've said you'd always know"

I wrote for you ago-long ago?

Other than that, this was beautifully written.

Wow, wonderful poem
touching and deep, i can imagine the event great job

Very good poem, I enjoyed it very much.

Now i must read more :) 5/5