Brilliant,i loved it and it was so true and from the heart.

OMG this is soo good.

Wow, gr8 poem. had great flow...nd so true..we cant just walk away from love...its just too hard lol
keep it up

Hey James, Welcome to PFP, and this is a really nice poem and very easy to relate to. Well done and keep up the good work.
Greta

Great poem.
It is so true.
Sometimes we can't control how we feel.
Like the words, like your style.
Take care

That was beautiful. It gets to the heart's core. 5/5!!!!!!!! :)