Wow there is some girl named haily that is very lucky
great job the passion was felt

laura

I love the depth to your poem. its sweet and well written

i wish sumone felt that way about me :)
keep up ur writing

<3
ps. sorry i couldnt comment any sooner ive been out of town

This is pretty, and almost had a perfect flow. the last two lines just didnt match.

=]

i finally commented. would you mind returning the favor?

This is deep! You express a lot here! 5/5

That was really good. i liked it alot.

good job

=]

Wow that was really good, she must be very special to you, keep up the good work

Kris.

Hey good job i can see that you really like her keep up the good work
~danielle~

Very good (: i really like it.

You are an amazing writer, if only i had this talent, this haily girl is very lucky to have such a guy like you to write beautiful poems about her.

Awwhh..that is really cute..Haily is very lucky to have a guy that would express his feelings toward her like this..
I loved this poem..keep up the great work.

Much Love.
Ashley. <3