by Debbie
How endearing. The way you've written this, by way of expressing one's feelings/thoughts within your words, was rather enchanting. Indeed, there are volumes of interpretations in between the lines, notably self-delusionment concerning matters of the heart and etc. I find it rather emotive and dreary, though. |
by Fsams
Extremely superb. The freeverse poetic form is best used in this piece. Well expressed and well penned. Its really awesome dear. You owe 5/5 from me. |