The first line of your poem is awesome! I really loved it. It's simple and sweet. It shows how undying love truly is!
Charisma*

Enjoyable read. Makes a lot of sense.

It's very good, I really like it. It's sad and it makes sense and its also very relateble.
And I agree with *Charisma*, the first line is perfect in showing how undying love is.

Keep it up, xxxx

I don't even know how you do it, You're just so good at writing!!! I love you Meeegan :D Great poem, keep it up :) :*