by Dan Bloom Jul 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Every time you leave |
by BREEawNUHH
I liked this poem a lot. Full of emotion. I also like the repeated line "and I'm still crying". I feel like it made the poem stronger. Good job. |
by Whitney
Awwww. keep up the good work |
by danielle
Good job keep it up |
by Kristin
Wow i thought that was great, it was so sweet and sad, it pulled me right in i could almost feel the way you feel. great job. |