Excellent poem 10/10 you got my vote.

A dark beauty is presented through your words a wonderous paradise which we cannot esacpe, great poem i really enjoyed it, keep it up and i luv your sytle xox sam

Awesome write. great imaginary and word usage. i give it a 5/5

Woww! that was amazingg! the word use was great, and so was the imagery.. you are a wonderful poet! keep it up, and thank you for the comment... 5/5 from mee

Sara

VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5

luzaN

The only reason I am here cos you made a comment on my poem......thanks for pointing out the grammatical error.

really good poem..... surprised