by Hatori Jul 2, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Separated for seemingly forever, |
by Yuna
This poem reflected upon Shalua and Shelke very truly. I understand now, with them being sisters and the relationship they share. You captured it and retold it as exact as the story goes. I loved the words you used such as "transcend", "astound", and "profound". A vocab like yours is a gift. I loved how you sneaked in Vincent Valentine, cause he's awsome!!! Anyways, congrats on third in my contest and continue to write such poems as these. Great job! |
I believe you wrote this Ballade with great skill it. It the first of its kind I have ever read |
by Marc Ortiz
That was beautiful Ashley! Even though I can't relate to the story.. You have created a picture in my mind, well done. I wish I could play Final fantasy 7 Dirge of Cerberus.. |
by Gasttlee
Magnificent! 5/5 I could never be able to write like this! |
by Fsams
Great poem with the right word choice. The poem is cohesive and the story is flowing well. Its very interesing, the way you have described the whole thing. Keep up the beautiful work. Tc |